{"id":20080,"date":"2018-07-03T20:36:15","date_gmt":"2018-07-04T01:36:15","guid":{"rendered":"http:\/\/blog.kenperlin.com\/?p=20080"},"modified":"2018-07-03T20:36:15","modified_gmt":"2018-07-04T01:36:15","slug":"hit-lit-wit-bit-pit-nit-fit","status":"publish","type":"post","link":"http:\/\/blog.kenperlin.com\/?p=20080","title":{"rendered":"Hit lit wit bit pit nit fit"},"content":{"rendered":"<p>Have you ever read something that was simply too clever?  I mean, were you ever immersed in a popular and well-reviewed novel when, out of nowhere, one particular phrase caught your eye simply because of its extreme wit or elegant construction?<\/p>\n<p>For me, this is not necessarily a good thing.  Finding my attention drawn too much to an individual phrase or sentence can yank me clear out of an otherwise good read.<\/p>\n<p>At such moments, I tend to feel that greater cleverness in writing is not always better.  I like it better when the writing is good in that more difficult but less showy way: When each part subsumes itself to the whole, thereby supporting an experience of maximum immersion.<\/p>\n<p>It&#8217;s an easy pit to fall into.  After all, who doesn&#8217;t love a well-turned phrase?<\/p>\n<p>Still, as Arthur Quiller-Couch once sensibly advised: &#8220;Murder your darlings.&#8221;<sup>1<\/sup><\/p>\n<p>Alas, I somehow managed to violate that rule in the very title of this post.  So I guess it&#8217;s time to quit this hit lit wit bit pit nit fit.<sup>2<\/sup><\/p>\n<p><small><br \/>\n1. Quiller-Couch, A., <i>On the Art of Writing<\/i>, University of Cambridge, 1916.<br \/>\n2. Op. cit.<\/p>\n","protected":false},"excerpt":{"rendered":"<p>Have you ever read something that was simply too clever? I mean, were you ever immersed in a popular and well-reviewed novel when, out of nowhere, one particular phrase caught your eye simply because of its extreme wit or elegant construction? For me, this is not necessarily a good thing. Finding my attention drawn too &hellip; <a href=\"http:\/\/blog.kenperlin.com\/?p=20080\" class=\"more-link\">Continue reading<span class=\"screen-reader-text\"> &#8220;Hit lit wit bit pit nit fit&#8221;<\/span><\/a><\/p>\n","protected":false},"author":1,"featured_media":0,"comment_status":"open","ping_status":"open","sticky":false,"template":"","format":"standard","meta":[],"categories":[1],"tags":[],"_links":{"self":[{"href":"http:\/\/blog.kenperlin.com\/index.php?rest_route=\/wp\/v2\/posts\/20080"}],"collection":[{"href":"http:\/\/blog.kenperlin.com\/index.php?rest_route=\/wp\/v2\/posts"}],"about":[{"href":"http:\/\/blog.kenperlin.com\/index.php?rest_route=\/wp\/v2\/types\/post"}],"author":[{"embeddable":true,"href":"http:\/\/blog.kenperlin.com\/index.php?rest_route=\/wp\/v2\/users\/1"}],"replies":[{"embeddable":true,"href":"http:\/\/blog.kenperlin.com\/index.php?rest_route=%2Fwp%2Fv2%2Fcomments&post=20080"}],"version-history":[{"count":4,"href":"http:\/\/blog.kenperlin.com\/index.php?rest_route=\/wp\/v2\/posts\/20080\/revisions"}],"predecessor-version":[{"id":20084,"href":"http:\/\/blog.kenperlin.com\/index.php?rest_route=\/wp\/v2\/posts\/20080\/revisions\/20084"}],"wp:attachment":[{"href":"http:\/\/blog.kenperlin.com\/index.php?rest_route=%2Fwp%2Fv2%2Fmedia&parent=20080"}],"wp:term":[{"taxonomy":"category","embeddable":true,"href":"http:\/\/blog.kenperlin.com\/index.php?rest_route=%2Fwp%2Fv2%2Fcategories&post=20080"},{"taxonomy":"post_tag","embeddable":true,"href":"http:\/\/blog.kenperlin.com\/index.php?rest_route=%2Fwp%2Fv2%2Ftags&post=20080"}],"curies":[{"name":"wp","href":"https:\/\/api.w.org\/{rel}","templated":true}]}}